Wednesday, 26 November 2008

Shiloh Writing

Sadly... Shiloh has to be given away as we are leaving. Giving up this amazing dog is one of the hardest things I have to do and so, I want him to have a lovable, comfortable and well- hospitalized home to live in. So I ask your help to get him a home like that. He is a pleasure to have and be with =)

He is undoubtedly cute... When those cute big brown eyes see you, you just want to give Shiloh a BIG hug... How can you not take him? They are so googly, big and brown... Awww... I don't want to give him away... =(
Playing with him is like being in a whole new different world... You never want to stop! He is exceedingly playful. He knows every game a dog can play, maybe even more! He is active to the nth degree... Always running around and falling. A little clumsy he might be, but he is himself; and that's why we love him!

He is very, very much* interested in guests but when strangers are at stake, he will do whatever to guard you. He is to the extreme! He loves you to the extreme and will do anything for you. He is also very independent. But that doesn't mean that he is a loner. Ad I mentioned before, he is very interactive with guests =) He can do impel of tricks, and they are all self- taught! He is very obedient and always is cheerful!

In conclusion, is it a real treat to have an amazing dog like Shiloh. I don't want to leave him but I HAVE to go... I hope you take him to your wonderful house, but don't forget to make him bed extra soft... He likes that =) After hearing ALL this, how will you not take him? And here's the best part... NO PRICE!! =P... I'm just joking, but that might give you a little more urge to get him.

The End

3 comments:

Kevin Bunarjo said...

Hey sumedha, there are lots of spelling errors (like around 2) that I found. I think you also need to have a pic of a 2 year old beagle (not a puppy beagle). Now for the good part. Your words are very persuasive! Also, your paragraphs are very long and are not filled with nonsense.
Kevin

Anonymous said...

Your paragraphs are really long Sumedha and the pic is soo cute but 2 year old Beagle Sumedha!!! The writing you just wrote will touch the hearts of people who reads it. Believe me!!!

Gemma said...

AWWWWWWWWWW...!!!!!!!!!!! That is the cutest pic ever, but that is a puppy not a 2 year old!!! Well good job and your paragraphs were quite long but quite good :) "You did a fine job Sumedha" :) :) ;)