Shiloh Writing

Sadly... Shiloh has to be given away as we are leaving. Giving up this amazing dog is one of the hardest things I have to do and so, I want him to have a lovable, comfortable and well- hospitalized home to live in. So I ask your help to get him a home like that. He is a pleasure to have and be with =)

He is undoubtedly cute... When those cute big brown eyes see you, you just want to give Shiloh a BIG hug... How can you not take him? They are so googly, big and brown... Awww... I don't want to give him away... =(
Playing with him is like being in a whole new different world... You never want to stop! He is exceedingly playful. He knows every game a dog can play, maybe even more! He is active to the nth degree... Always running around and falling. A little clumsy he might be, but he is himself; and that's why we love him!

He is very, very much* interested in guests but when strangers are at stake, he will do whatever to guard you. He is to the extreme! He loves you to the extreme and will do anything for you. He is also very independent. But that doesn't mean that he is a loner. Ad I mentioned before, he is very interactive with guests =) He can do impel of tricks, and they are all self- taught! He is very obedient and always is cheerful!

In conclusion, is it a real treat to have an amazing dog like Shiloh. I don't want to leave him but I HAVE to go... I hope you take him to your wonderful house, but don't forget to make him bed extra soft... He likes that =) After hearing ALL this, how will you not take him? And here's the best part... NO PRICE!! =P... I'm just joking, but that might give you a little more urge to get him.

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Selling Shiloh (PLAN)

Introduction

Fun
>playful
>active

Faithful
>guard you
>responsible

Conclusion

My Passion (NEW)

MUSIC

My passion is listening to music. Not just hearing the bands and singers sing their hearts out ( though I do like that...) but identifying the different sounds of natural things. This is also music to me... Music is more than just something I listen everyday... It's to hear a voice, to recognize talent and to get the chance to appreciate one's piece of art...

Music cannot be interpreted... There is no definition of music. My band teacher, Mr. Beder says that music is sound (s) that are in a synchronized manner. But is that the only kind of music? Music is a very important part in all of our lives. If there is no music, there is no sound.

I can never imagine a life without music... Visualize it... A world with no music... no sound... Aargh! It gives me chills just thinking about it. It's like the whole world will be deafened. Music is a very important factor in our lives and we should really understand its importance. These artists, when they sing; all we do is criticize them, but have we ever gone in front of an audience and sung? Most likely... not!

You don't have to have 'talent' to be a musician. You just have to practice. Some people are 'gifted' with music talent and at first, I used to envy them. But they are missing the most important step in being successful and that is the learning stage! Honestly... Without music my life would not be the same. Most of ours wouldn't.

In conclusion, music is 'in my blood.' Music is not just something you hear, it's something you feel. And I wouldn't say that I can actually 'feel' music. Because I cannot! The ones who can feel it are truly 'gifted with a musical talent.'

THANK YOU!!

My Passion

My passion is a game. Not an ordinary game, but a game in which you can always learn new things and improve. It is a game for everyone. In fact... It's not JUST a game, it's something way beyond... Once you pick up that racket, it kind of makes me want to play the it more and more. This is referred to as badminton. Easy game. Shuttle, racket, hit and bam! Simple.

Some people have a talent for this game and are brilliant at it as they pick that racket. Most learn gradually and reach to the top. I fit in the second category. Before, when I used to see the ones that have the 'talent' play; I used to think they were so lucky. Now, I feel that they are missing out on the most important stage, and that is learning and you mistakes. If you don't make them, how will you learn? This part is truly memorable when you look back at your progress...

People say badminton is one of those soft sports. As it does not involve pushing and you don't really exert yourself. Well... I'd like to watch you play this non- exertion game.... This game has given me so much, but most importantly... It has given me FUN!! We are so fortunate to be introduced to this in our lives. I LOVE BADMINTON!!!

Expository Text (PLAN)

Saying thank you is important- Introduction

It's Polite- 1st Idea

It lets the other person know you care- 2nd Idea

It gives you an inside personal good feeling- 3rd Idea

Thank you is a must- Conclusion